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I thought I would revisit the subject of justice as it’s always very much at the forefront of world news. Everywhere we look there are either abuses of justice, a blind eye to justice, attempts at justice, and miscarriages of justice. There are people fighting our corner for justice but they are underpaid and few in numbers.
The International Academic Forum (IAFOR), a research organisation based in Japan which encourages interdisciplinary discussion, and facilitating intercultural awareness, approached me to be a judge for their haiku contest on the conference theme of justice. I knew this could be a strong opportunity for people to write about. Actually I seem to remember a number of people not sure how to write about this topic for haiku. But you only have to remember the Japanese haiku writers who stood against Japan entering World War Two.
There is a current craze to watch superheroes on film & streaming video where caped, and sometimes not caped, crime fighters/crusaders have extra-ordinary powers, courtesy of DC Comics and Marvel Comics. There are other vigilante movies as well, of course, and we sometimes yearn for a fight against injustice that doesn't appear to be addressed by the appointed authorities in our towns, cities, or central government.
This haiku was influenced by watching one such movie starring Jodie Foster: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Brave_One_(2007_film)
This haiku was influenced by watching one such movie starring Jodie Foster: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Brave_One_(2007_film)
vigilante movie
my elbow
heavy on your knee
Alan Summers
Publication credits: Symmetry Pebbles ed. Richard Thomas (2011)
Anthology credit:
The Humours of Haiku ISBN 978-0-9565725-4-7 ed. David Cobb (Iron Press 2012)
Collection credit: Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)
inside the apple core
a pocket full of sorry
kills the gun
Alan Summers
David Grayson:
Non literal work, from LANGUAGE poetry to some gendai haiku, forces the reader to see words afresh, outside of their normal sequence and context.
In Alan Summers’ haiku, the phrase “apple core” conjures something essential and constitutive. The line “a pocket full of sorry” evokes considerable (“full”) pain and regret. “Gun” is the final word and it closes with a hard consonant. It seems that something vital has been extinguished.
Three disparate images combine to convey a sentiment of pain and death. While semantically non-linear, it’s important to recognize that Summers’ words are sharp and concrete.
The categories “verbal” and “visual” are not wholly separate, however. A neuroscientist and literary scholar, Laura Otis points out that the two “coexist in every mind” and reflects that creativity “often emerges when they interact.”
Burmark says that “there is a natural progression in the way we process information: first the image, then the words.”
Loading a Gun: Imagery in Haiku
by David Grayson
Frogpond vol. 41:3 fall 2018 (publication of the Haiku Society of America) pages 105 -108
Haiku originally published:
hedgerow, a journal of small poems #111 ed. Caroline Skanne (2017)
hedgerow, a journal of small poems #111 ed. Caroline Skanne (2017)
Language poetry: Taking its name from the magazine edited by Charles Bernstein and Bruce Andrews (L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E), Language poetry is an avant garde poetry movement that emerged in the late 1960's and early 1970's as a response to mainstream American poetry.
Laura Otis,, Ph.D “A New Look at Visual Thinking,” Psychology Today (February 16, 2016).
Lynell Burmark, Ph.D.:
Visual Content and Communication Should be Your Secret Sauce
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Here is the original judge’s results:
Writer and poet Alan Summers, Guest Judge for the IAFOR Vladimir Devidé Haiku Award 2016, presents his special selection and commentary on the theme of “justice”.
I was delighted to see so many authors use the theme of justice as inspiration for their haiku. There are all kinds of justice – it has its own lexicon of both sorrow and joy, from the victims who barely survive injustices, to those who win the fight for justice. These remarkable haiku showcase various poignant approaches to the conference theme.
Wabi-sabi (侘寂) is a Japanese term that describes the acceptance of imperfection, impermanence and incompletion, manifested in the art of kintsugi (金継ぎ) in which broken pottery is repaired with golden lacquer. These haiku are likened to the golden repairs, in that they represent the acceptance, reflection and celebration of the overcoming of injustice.
1ST CHOICE
sunny afternoon
a shadow
on the mammogram
Suraja Roychowdhury, United States
We start with an innocuous sunny day and then a shadow, and all seems well. Then the last line jolts us. The shadow is not an innocent passing phenomenon of a bright sunny day, but is instead a more ominous presence on a breast cancer x-ray.
The haiku is well crafted, building up line by line until the reveal, the twist in the narrative, perhaps encouraging us as readers to appreciate every single second of a sunny day.
2ND CHOICE
first snow
the red hat
of a refugee
Skaidrite Stelze, United States
Red is a potent symbol against the fresh snow. I’m reminded of Steven Spielberg’s film adaptation of Schindler’s List, in which a little girl wears a red coat and everyone else is in monotone. Red against the white snow at first suggests warmth, comfort and safety, which quickly turns to danger for the refugee who will endure winter on cold, unfamiliar ground. The line order of the poem builds suspense and subtle emotional undertones.
3RD CHOICE
after therapy the same war
Lamart Cooper, United States
This haiku is extremely well crafted and utterly haunting, pared to the bone with just five words. It touches on the war that so many suffer within their own minds, but also hints at despair of the world’s physical conflicts. Many can experience an internal war, even after therapy for treatment of trauma experienced through violence, war or injustice, but this sufferer is exhausted by the fight, both with themselves and with others.
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4TH CHOICE
hallowed ground
so many ringtones
among the stones
Earl R. Keener, United States
There is a poignant note to the first two lines, with the suggestion that all those buried in recent years are bound to their mobile devices even in death, and that those mourning are too attached in life to switch off, even on “hallowed ground”. The haiku uses end rhyme, with “ringtones” and “stones”, as well as a strong assonance. For me the “own” sound in “tone” and “stone” makes this more deeply moving. We can’t take the things we own with us into death.
5TH CHOICE
war-torn city
all the coffin makers
working overtime
Barbara A. Taylor, Australia
With powerful brevity we are placed into war, almost as a witness, in which justice takes a back seat. The coffin makers are making a living amongst the many dead and mourning, working hard to bring some dignity to the victims. It serves as a reminder that ordinary people, businesses and lives exist in these sites of terrible injustice.
Haiku often feature the human condition in an unexpected way. A subtle “sadness” that isn’t “sad”, or an “aloneness” that isn’t “lonely”, which is so typically Japanese. This is often a keynote in haiku and draws on the universality of experience. Each haiku evoked a deeply poignant response within me, and I hope they do the same for you.
– Alan Summers
The Japan Times award-winning writer, and co-founder of the haiku (and related genres) workshop and event provider Call of the Page.
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Karen Hoy & Alan Summers
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